Unfortunately, I didn't receive any feedback on my first Elevator Pitch. But looking back at my last elevator pitch, I think I need to show the audience of investors more emotion to convey my pitch more memorably. For the second round, I have produced more feelings to help the investors understand the devastating problem faced by many incoming high school seniors. The most significant factor that influences many on choosing where to go to college is the cost of attendance. Many can afford this cost as it is now seen more as an expectation to attend rather than a luxury. Genuinely, by mentioning that the funding will be assisted by Florida taxpayers, it provides a transparent approach and solution that encompasses the majority of the Florida resident population. It is essential to mention that to the investors because the investors (audience) can be state government officials to help begin proposing the idea. I think it can be a compelling opportunity to undertake, but the magnitude of the solution is so much bigger.
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